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kia ora my name is maria I really liked how you keep it short and simple I learnt that you can use your other senses insted of seeing what it was next time maybe add more infomation bye Maria
Hello, i'm Talei from saint marys. I liked how you included a photo in your slides. I learnt that No.D was sand and that it sounded like powder. Maybe you could add a little more writing and explain what its like.
G,day Im mack in your class I like the way you said you first thought it was sand. Also the way you Included the picture of the mystery box. Maybe you could do more.. ma te wa Mack
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ReplyDeletekia ora my name is maria
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you keep it short and simple
I learnt that you can use your other senses insted of seeing what it was
next time maybe add more infomation
bye Maria
Hello, i'm Talei from saint marys.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you included a photo in your slides.
I learnt that No.D was sand and that it sounded like powder.
Maybe you could add a little more writing and explain what its like.
G,day Im mack in your class
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said you first thought it was sand.
Also the way you Included the picture of the mystery box.
Maybe you could do more..
ma te wa
Mack